Heavenly Hallucinations of Love's Divine Destiny

A wondrous spirit of true love now softly murmurs its echo
On the wings of God’s angels, as they ascend heavenward.

This and more occurs as radiant cultured pearls begin dancing
Their magical-mystical dance deliciously in the oceans deep.

With this, the bright-blue-mirrored waves of the oceans move
In a melodious tempo of love with the pearls as they dance.

Caressing the heavenly sparkles rippling deep in the oceans’ waves,
An enchanted diamond-cut glass now trembles and shatters loudly!

At this moment, a mermaid of angelic pulchritude takes her divine
Throne as the mystical dance continues throughout the late night.

Crystal chimes begin sounding pure with a fire and fury of emotions
Within our hearts, as they excite our passions palpably and exquisitely!

The candlelight’s effulgent reflection in this moment transfixes me true,
By your warm and loving touch and the magic of your presence with me. 

Coloring and scenting the air surpasses all others as the breathless and
Honeycombed eminence of your being touches the depths of my soul!  

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – July 21, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/11/2018 1:50:00 PM
Liam, my friend, an excellent collaboration by yourself and Gary. The words flow as one from the beginning of this wondrous piece to the end. I just lose myself within the wonderful visions and the excellent words. The glory of light in words my friends. May your pens ever run gold. May your collaborations ever shine. Has to be a fave Liam. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 8/9/2018 7:29:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! I do think I know this one!! I am very glad to see that you posted it at this time. The second posting of it is as good as the first posting. It was indeed a great pleasure for both of us to share our mutual ideas and flowing ink on this most enchanting couplet!! A true collaborative effort all the way. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 8/8/2018 10:24:00 PM
A great collabaration Gary and Liam, you work well together Tom
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Date: 8/8/2018 1:19:00 PM
whew...good read...very...mellow
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Date: 8/8/2018 8:46:00 AM
Your poem is a journey through divinity..words of angelic spirit..a spiritual walk in heavenly land. Well done Gary and Liam..enjoyed reading your poem.
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