Heavenly

When two hearts conjoin
The twain beats as one divine
life becomes sublime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Awesome descriptive haiku Earle -- Wilma
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July 26, 2010 at 8:01 PM
Beautifully composed a Great Haiku. You have expressed the transformation of two into one in a very lucid way. The result would always be sublime. Extremely beautiful write my friend. Love and Best wishes ....Ravindra........Earle Brown
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