Deb Radke Poet Rhyme

Heaven-Bound

With REVERENCE he approached the sacred ground 
ENCOMPASSED by a haughty sense of pride,
Content in knowing he was heaven-bound,
That certain PREDILICTION, not denied;
CONSTERNATION showed at once, he could see 
CONDEMNATION from above, then APATHY;
UNEARTHLINESS a practice he’d not tried. 





10/31/2018

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Vladislav Raven November 3, 2018 at 8:16 AM Hi Deb, you fit the words so effortlessly into this excellent little gem. A write that holds the reader from beginning to end. Such wonderful content in such a little jewel. If for a contest I wish you well with this wonderful write. have a wonderful Saturday Hugs....Mike. XX Deb Radke November 6, 2018 at 7:48 PM Thanks, Mike. You've given me high praise here and I appreciate your words so much.

Vijay Pandit November 2, 2018 at 6:47 AM You fit those heavy words in such a brief poem..elegantly done..best for a win, Deb. Deb Radke November 5, 2018 at 8:17 PM Thanks, Vijay. I appreciate your words. You are very kind and I always look forward to reading your comments.

Carolyn Devonshire November 1, 2018 at 3:37 PM Many of us probably hope that we will be secure in knowing we are "heaven bound" as we near the end of our days. This is quite a thought-provoking, yet brief verse. Well done! Your work stands well on its own, but if for a contest, I send winning wishes your way. Hugs, Carolyn Deb Radke November 5, 2018 at 8:16 PM Thank you, Carolyn. Your words warm my heart. I appreciate your support greatly.