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Heaven Shines

Heaven Shines Star light Twinkles beyond So bright Above The atmosphere In love Divine Heaven always Will shine April 3,2020 Sponsor:Joseph May Contest:The musette 3 verses aba cdc efe 3 lines 2/4/2

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John Fleming

Date: 6/28/2020 3:57:00 PM

I have commented previously just how much I like this poem...not surprised it has garnered you, yet again, another well deserved contest win -- very well done, Poetess!! With affection. :) john

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2020 5:24:00 PM

Heavenly! Congrats on your win, Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:59:00 AM

Andrea thanks so very much!;)

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/16/2020 6:34:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this prudent observation of yours through your great poetic style. I'm delighted with your last three lines: "Divine Heaven always Will shine." God bless you.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:59:00 AM

Beata thank you!;)

Joseph May

Date: 4/15/2020 7:06:00 PM

Lovely verse Brend, Congrats on your win

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/16/2020 6:09:00 AM

Thank you joseph and for teaching me a new poetry form!;)

John Watt

Date: 4/12/2020 12:24:00 AM

Brenda, a delightful musette of celestial wonder blended together with love and light. Good luck to you in the contest ~ John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/16/2020 6:09:00 AM

John thank you so much!;)

John Fleming

Date: 4/10/2020 11:19:00 AM

Never heard of a "musette"; will have to explore a little further. Do very much like your little poem though...I agree with Gordon -- "such a lovely, heavenly piece". Fondest thoughts! :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/16/2020 6:08:00 AM

Thank you John I had never heard of it either until I entered Joseph's contest! ;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/9/2020 4:46:00 PM

Such a lovely heavenly piece Brenda, hope all well with you, keep safe and healthy, Blessings always,Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:22:00 AM

Thank you Gordon so much!;)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/5/2020 2:01:00 PM

Beautiful.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/10/2020 4:21:00 AM

Kai thank you!;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/3/2020 3:07:00 PM

You never seize to shine dear sissy...hope you're staying safe...love & hugs from six feet away lol...bro bro :o)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/4/2020 7:28:00 AM

Bro bro thank you so very much! Yea as safe as one can be out here! But I will survive I have worse things!;)