Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Heaven Shines

Heaven Shines

Star light
Twinkles beyond
So bright

Above 
The atmosphere 
In love

Divine 
Heaven always
Will shine
 
April 3,2020
Sponsor:Joseph May 
Contest:The musette
3 verses aba cdc efe
3 lines 2/4/2

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John Fleming June 28, 2020 at 3:57 PM I have commented previously just how much I like this poem...not surprised it has garnered you, yet again, another well deserved contest win -- very well done, Poetess!! With affection. :) john

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2020 at 5:24 PM Heavenly! Congrats on your win, Brenda. Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:59 AM Andrea thanks so very much!;)

Beata Agustin April 16, 2020 at 6:34 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this prudent observation of yours through your great poetic style. I'm delighted with your last three lines: "Divine Heaven always Will shine." God bless you. Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:59 AM Beata thank you!;)

Joseph May April 15, 2020 at 7:06 PM Lovely verse Brend, Congrats on your win Brenda Chiri April 16, 2020 at 6:09 AM Thank you joseph and for teaching me a new poetry form!;)

John Watt April 12, 2020 at 12:24 AM Brenda, a delightful musette of celestial wonder blended together with love and light. Good luck to you in the contest ~ John Brenda Chiri April 16, 2020 at 6:09 AM John thank you so much!;)

John Fleming April 10, 2020 at 11:19 AM Never heard of a "musette"; will have to explore a little further. Do very much like your little poem though...I agree with Gordon -- "such a lovely, heavenly piece". Fondest thoughts! :) john Brenda Chiri April 16, 2020 at 6:08 AM Thank you John I had never heard of it either until I entered Joseph's contest! ;)

Gordon Mcconnell April 9, 2020 at 4:46 PM Such a lovely heavenly piece Brenda, hope all well with you, keep safe and healthy, Blessings always,Gordon Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:22 AM Thank you Gordon so much!;)

Kai Michael Neumann April 5, 2020 at 2:01 PM Beautiful. Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:21 AM Kai thank you!;)

Winged Warrior April 3, 2020 at 3:07 PM You never seize to shine dear sissy...hope you're staying safe...love & hugs from six feet away lol...bro bro :o) Brenda Chiri April 4, 2020 at 7:28 AM Bro bro thank you so very much! Yea as safe as one can be out here! But I will survive I have worse things!;)