Heaven Sent

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At bedtime he closes his eyes Thru meadows chases butterflies Sunshine in his hair Free without a care He’s ten and innocent Surely heaven sent Each night distant stars he touches Leaves behind his crutches The soul of a budding drummer Liberated thru fields of summer Recurring dreams of running free And like his friends he climbs a tree AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on May 18, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/20/2019 11:18:00 PM

A fav for me so beautiful, so touching thank you

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2019 11:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated. Means a lot to me.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/19/2019 2:47:00 PM

A true piece poetic artistry and a FAV! Thank you... Panagiota

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 3:42:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment and FAV'ing my poem, Panagiota. This poem is actually about my husband who got polio as a toddler and has been on crutches all his life. Around the tender age of 10 he needed a serious operation on his legs. It means a lot that you FAVE'd this poem.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/19/2019 10:53:00 AM

Blessed are those who are blessed with offspring. Very nice

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 10:56:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Allen.