Heaven Only Knows

 Dream home and career? Check. 
    Respect and prestige? Check. 
 Success? Money to burn? Check. 
   Yet, he still remains unfulfilled. 
 What colossus could be missing? 


Date written: 06/13/2023

lifemysteryverse

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Joanna Daniel

June 14, 2023 at 1:18 AM

Heaven... Clever title and poem, Edward:)

Edward Ibeh

June 14, 2023 at 2:25 AM

Thank you very much, Joanna:-)

Speaks Volumes

June 13, 2023 at 11:10 PM

The thing I would miss if I had all that, would be children in his life to share his money and home, admire his career, and learn from his example of respect and prestige, and offer him love and family. I guess this is not a prerequesite for some. Each reader of your thought provoking poem will have a different answer, I am sure. Well done, so few words to make us contemplate and admire your unique ability.

Edward Ibeh

June 14, 2023 at 2:30 AM

Yes, it's meaningless without having anyone to share it all with, SV. Thanks for the awesome feedback and visit!