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Heaven on tiptoe

Ballet slippers on her feet.
She twirled so gracefully across the room.
As ethereal as an angel.


Words: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 2:31 PM
wow, this is magnificent and beautiful. Have to fave it.
Gauthier Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 6:05 PM
Thanks Sara ~ much appreciated.
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