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Heaven On Earth Extended

For all its worth How many heavens on earth? I pop the question Answer me For all its worth Creation, importance growth Right here in this heaven Right here on this Earth Speak good, do good For all its worth Isn't this heaven Right here on this earth? Explore, discover, and the joy Will bring you more Heaven Right here on this earth For all its worth Good deeds, fresh feeds Filling the needs Of family, friends and foes Right here in heaven Right here on this earth For all its worth Desperation, destitution, no resolution Diverse arguments, increased confusion No fixes, no facts, failure to act Cry your need and your heart will bleed Right here in this heaven Right here on this earth. For all its worth Prostitution, enslavement, confinement and traverse The hell hole, dung hole No pardon, pure sore The the knocking on the door Right here in heaven, right here on earth For all its worth No pacification, only victimization And then criticize the triers, bystanders And the afflicted souls That bites the bullets In perilous goals For all its worth Right here in this heaven Right here on this earth

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Date: 12/21/2012 3:38:00 PM
I think we receive small glimpses of Heaven each day. I guess if we look at it this could be considered our appetizer. Just enough to wet our appetites for the feast we will eventually enjoy. I like your poem it is important to also think about here and now and try to enjoy all that we have here.
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:48:00 PM
thanks for reading, hope we all find a little heaven somewhere.
Date: 12/20/2012 5:13:00 PM
Love your message here. It's nice to see someone like you new at the Soup. WEll, maybe you are not new, but to me you are!! Merry Christmas season, robert.
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:55:00 PM
Thanks for your Christmas Greetings, in a bit of a whirl getting acquainted but good experiennce so far, wishes returned.
Date: 12/20/2012 10:39:00 AM
Like this one Robert, very good xx
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Mandy, like your style too. Thanks that you think it's worthy of comment

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