Heaven On Earth Extended

For all its worth
How many heavens on earth?
I pop the question
Answer me
For all its worth
Creation, importance growth
Right here in this heaven
Right here on this Earth
Speak good, do good
For all its worth
Isn't this heaven
Right here on this earth?
Explore, discover, and the joy
Will bring you more
Heaven
Right here on this earth
For all its worth
Good deeds, fresh feeds
Filling the needs
Of family, friends and foes
Right here in heaven
Right here on this earth
For all its worth
Desperation, destitution, no resolution
Diverse arguments, increased confusion
No fixes, no facts, failure to act
Cry your need and your heart will bleed
Right here in this heaven
Right here on this earth.
For all its worth
Prostitution, enslavement, 
confinement and traverse
The hell hole, dung hole
No pardon, pure sore
The the knocking on the door
Right here in heaven, 
right here on earth
For all its worth
No pacification, only victimization
And then criticize 
the triers, bystanders
And the afflicted souls
That bites the bullets
In perilous goals
For all its worth
Right here in this heaven
Right here on this earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/21/2012 3:38:00 PM
I think we receive small glimpses of Heaven each day. I guess if we look at it this could be considered our appetizer. Just enough to wet our appetites for the feast we will eventually enjoy. I like your poem it is important to also think about here and now and try to enjoy all that we have here.
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:48:00 PM
thanks for reading, hope we all find a little heaven somewhere.
Date: 12/20/2012 5:13:00 PM
Love your message here. It's nice to see someone like you new at the Soup. WEll, maybe you are not new, but to me you are!! Merry Christmas season, robert.
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:55:00 PM
Thanks for your Christmas Greetings, in a bit of a whirl getting acquainted but good experiennce so far, wishes returned.
Date: 12/20/2012 10:39:00 AM
Like this one Robert, very good xx
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Mandy, like your style too. Thanks that you think it's worthy of comment
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