The Situation Poet List

Heaven On Earth

submit to God your lowly condition
assend to austerity with good intentions

kindness will be met with kindness abroad
unity and togetherness our goal not fraud

peace and harmony the good old fashion way
true love in our hearts for all this day

table for one can be for two
if manners and niceness are properly used

and it would be so fitting
for us to thank the Lord

for what we lost in eden
now happily restored

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Vince Suzadail Jr. April 14, 2012 at 10:07 PM Power of love can make it happen. love of power is not the way.

Phyllis Babcock February 16, 2011 at 6:36 AM We could only wish for heaven on earth. That would be awesome. If only we all could sit at one table in love and kindness that would be heaven. God Bless phyl

Gert W. Knop January 7, 2011 at 9:24 AM Well written, T.S.! Enjoyed the read! And thank you for your kind comments! Have a great new year! ...Gert

Poet Destroyer A January 4, 2011 at 7:46 PM makes me wonder,,, have a nice one,..p.d.

John Loving Iii January 4, 2011 at 12:13 PM we can only wish. john

Carol Sunshine Brown January 3, 2011 at 4:10 AM What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry T.S. Love, Carol

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway January 2, 2011 at 5:30 AM Enjoyed this hopeful write T.S. Happy New Year! Lay

Sara Kendrick January 2, 2011 at 4:36 AM Good one..One day that Eden will be totally restored and there will be peace and harmony on this earth..Enjoyed your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara