Heaven On Earth

The beauty of your love is fire,
From head to toe you're my desire!
Your loveliness I admire.

You're like a rare canvas of art.
The wondrous beauty fills my heart.
You've become my counterpart!

One through ten, you're eleven!
Your beauty is like heaven.....

Perfume is the frosting on cake.
Smelling it makes me want to take,
You in my arms and love make.

The portrait on this canvas rare,
Of your beauty makes me to dare,
Think that you could ever care.

For someone in a cell.
Living this way is hell.

Perfumed essence transcends your want.
You're my desire so don't say "don't!"
Please don't be one that will taunt.

I want you in the deepest way.
May never be another day.
Let's come together and play!

One through ten, you, eleven.
Knew you'd be like heaven!


Written for Catie Lindsey's contest "Focus on syllables"
8,8,7. 8,8,7. 6,6.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/7/2010 8:18:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on another great win in the syllables contest with this amazing entry and write.. enjoy my friend with great honor and luv .. enjoy ...
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2010 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations Jimmy on a well deserved win in the top ten. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2010 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jimmy in Catie's contest "Focus on Syllables". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2010 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Jimmy
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2010 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful love poem, Jimmy. Your big sis is proud of you! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2010 5:50:00 PM
This is just beautiful Jimmy..best of luck in the contest..Take care~Deb
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2010 3:49:00 PM
:) Exceptional Jimmy, the best to you in Catie's contest. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2010 2:26:00 PM
Great great entry Jimmy,lovely poem indeed,as Ruben quoted below!Celene!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2010 10:54:00 AM
wonderful entry Jimmy , good luck in the contest , I love it
Login to Reply
Date: 10/20/2010 8:46:00 AM
Jimmy, I love your entry for Catie's contest. Good luck to you for the contest with this gem ;) Wilma
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad