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Heaven On Earth

The sent of a woman is like fine incense
feeing our heads with romantic thoughts
creating feelings so strong and tense
the simple curves enticing us so
driving us mad with rapid thoughts
the way women talk and smile
for that pleasure we would run a mile

The embrace of a woman is like fine silk
the creamy soft skin similar to milk
the way they walk on leggs so strong
grabs men attention from beginning to end
to tempt us so is never wrong
to hear a woman breathe is like a song
a chime in our head like a gong

The smile of a woman is like heaven
only   the good deserve it
only strong will receive it
trust me brother if you fail to believe it
you will never touch heaven on earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Segal Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 2:19 PM
Thank you for your comments, I can show you how to get to heaven on earth with my poem, Creator Of Your Life Are You, take a look, love Simone
Brown Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 12:37 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Malcolm. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 6:41 PM
Excellent, Malcolm, and I believe u speak to all men regarding all women... must be talking and writing from experience... great job with your wording.. so enjoyed... thankxxx for your lovely comments on my poetry today... happy to share ... do u have a blog posted yet? mine is finally on with one photo that I could upload.. keep at it.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Owens Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 3:48 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading...Marty
Segal Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 1:21 PM
I love this poem! It's nice to be appreciated,well written,love Simone
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