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Heaven On Earth

The sent of a woman is like fine incense feeing our heads with romantic thoughts creating feelings so strong and tense the simple curves enticing us so driving us mad with rapid thoughts the way women talk and smile for that pleasure we would run a mile The embrace of a woman is like fine silk the creamy soft skin similar to milk the way they walk on leggs so strong grabs men attention from beginning to end to tempt us so is never wrong to hear a woman breathe is like a song a chime in our head like a gong The smile of a woman is like heaven only the good deserve it only strong will receive it trust me brother if you fail to believe it you will never touch heaven on earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/6/2009 2:19:00 PM
Thank you for your comments, I can show you how to get to heaven on earth with my poem, Creator Of Your Life Are You, take a look, love Simone
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Date: 11/12/2009 12:37:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Malcolm. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2009 6:41:00 PM
Excellent, Malcolm, and I believe u speak to all men regarding all women... must be talking and writing from experience... great job with your wording.. so enjoyed... thankxxx for your lovely comments on my poetry today... happy to share ... do u have a blog posted yet? mine is finally on with one photo that I could upload.. keep at it.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:48:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 11/11/2009 1:21:00 PM
I love this poem! It's nice to be appreciated,well written,love Simone
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