Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Heaven In the Morning

Waking to the dawns 
pattern of lace
Lovingly laid there 
upon your face
How the light and the 
dark did dance
Mesmorizing me into 
a deep trance
Even its beauty paled 
compared to you
Smiling i think you're  my 
dream come true
When your eyes opened 
oh so slow
Gorgeous eyes always 
holding a glow
Touching your face, you 
made me calm
Turning my hand over 
you kiss my palm
A beautiful simplicity 
just felt so right
Even the sun seemed to 
shine  more bright
Leaning forward you 
whisper in my ear
Heaven this morning 
as you pull me near



There is nothing better than waking beside on you love and still loving each morning!

Date:10/4/2019
Contest:best rhyme
Sponsor:Tania Kitchin

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John Fleming October 24, 2019 at 10:04 AM Ah ha! I see that this one is indeed a competition entry -- and so it should be! I don't know where you placed in this contest...but from me it would have received, most assuredly, high marks. An admirable little write, Poetess -- most admirable! Lots of warm affection. :) john

Kim Rodrigues October 8, 2019 at 5:06 PM Beautiful! Brenda Chiri October 8, 2019 at 7:28 PM Kim thank you so much!;)

Gershon Wolf October 8, 2019 at 10:32 AM I'm with Chris' comment, partially. Additionally, I think it's a 'Brenda Love Special,' in and of its own right! Just beautifully penned, my friend. Peace and joy, Gershon (Soup mail, please) Brenda Chiri October 8, 2019 at 7:27 PM Lol a Brenda love special is it now!;) thank you so much Gershon being you! And giving my smile!;)

Quoth Theraven October 7, 2019 at 10:50 PM Brenda, And you so sentimental.., playing our heart strings with verse so lovely. I can swoon, or at least I used to. You've caught a moment to hold. -Richard Brenda Chiri October 7, 2019 at 11:33 PM Richard thank you I really appreciate your comment and visit!;)

Gordon Mcconnell October 7, 2019 at 3:22 PM Lovely thoughts penned so well Brenda, so romantic with delightful strokes on your pen. Hope all good with you, on holiday in Scottish highlands this week. Have a great week, Gordon Brenda Chiri October 7, 2019 at 11:32 PM Thanks so much Gordon I so appreciate your visit!;)

Richard Lamoureux October 7, 2019 at 6:40 AM Nothing better than being someone’s ream come true. Great entry Brenda. Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri October 7, 2019 at 11:32 PM Your so right Rick! Thank you!;)

Elaine Perrin October 6, 2019 at 2:46 PM Beautifully romantic , I love it :-) x Brenda Chiri October 6, 2019 at 3:11 PM Thank you Elaine so much!;)

Swetha Vangaveti October 6, 2019 at 8:02 AM Ah!!! Wow!! Super cute, super romantic verse. Brenda Chiri October 6, 2019 at 3:10 PM Thank you! I appreciate it!;)

Paul Callus October 5, 2019 at 9:48 AM You deliver a charming, flowing poem in delightful rhyme, Brenda. Heavenly dawns...so romantic! ~ Warm regards // paul Brenda Chiri October 5, 2019 at 7:08 PM Thank you Paul I always love your stopping by!;)

Regina Mcintosh October 4, 2019 at 10:01 PM I love your poem. It's beautiful and filled with emotion. I enjoyed it tremendously. May God always bless you with beautiful poetry. Prayers, Gina Brenda Chiri October 5, 2019 at 7:08 PM Ahh thank you Regina your too kind!;)

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2019 at 8:40 PM a beautiful rhyme indeed, Brenda. And there is nothing like waking up to such love. Brenda Chiri October 5, 2019 at 7:07 PM Andrea thank you I do appreciate your comment!;)

Tom Cunningham October 4, 2019 at 1:59 PM Your romantic streak shines through in your verse Brenda. Tom Brenda Chiri October 4, 2019 at 2:01 PM Thank you Tom your too sweet!;)

Chris Green October 4, 2019 at 1:08 PM Sounds like a good morning soupers poem if there ever was one. Beautiful Brenda. Brenda Chiri October 4, 2019 at 1:10 PM Thank you Chris so much!;)