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Heaven In Hell

Throat is parched Sweat drips in my face Clothes are heavy on my back What the hell is this place?! The sun is making me crazy I can't think nor see clearly... Do I spy my relief in an oasis? Water that I need so dearly? I walk nearer yet it stays out of reach; I'm so frustrated, I just want to cry. I need this drink to quench my thirst Because if I don't, I'll surely die!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/16/2012 8:14:00 PM
This is a great deep verse... 1 can never say what to expect...enjoyed pd
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Constance Gilmore
Date: 7/16/2012 9:21:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)

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