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Heaven Help Us

Danger in the sky
One deep breath of the dragon
Will destroy mankind


FOR NATURE'S REVENGE CONTEST

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Andrea Dietrich

June 14, 2010 at 9:42 PM

good one. I remember that contest!

Jimmy Anderson

May 15, 2010 at 3:55 PM

Hey Faleshia, thnx for always reading and leaving comments on my writes...truly appreciated...Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 13, 2010 at 4:11 PM

Just wanted to say "hi" Faleshia and hope all is well with u.. will be going on vacation for my birthday on the 18 till the 31st so hope u are OK...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Derrick Burton

May 5, 2010 at 5:43 AM

awesome short poetry and I hope that dragonn gets to blow any kind of fire anywhere. Have a great day.:)

Gert W. Knop

May 4, 2010 at 8:57 AM

For sure does, Faleshia! Interesting write and good luck in the contest...Have a great time...Gert

Zera Masters

May 3, 2010 at 12:56 PM

imagery is amazing.

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 3, 2010 at 10:44 AM

From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing Faleshia. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 2, 2010 at 6:55 PM

All the best in the contest. Nice expressions

Poet Destroyer A

May 2, 2010 at 5:23 PM

deep write, love the revenge, good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Travis Cotrel

May 2, 2010 at 2:35 PM

Hello Faly. reading your poems, take a look at mine. Love ya.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 2, 2010 at 2:13 PM

A sure winner Faleshia.. an excellent depiction of the photo... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry always... good luck ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"