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Heaven Help Us

Danger in the sky One deep breath of the dragon Will destroy mankind FOR NATURE'S REVENGE CONTEST

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:42:00 PM

good one. I remember that contest!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/15/2010 3:55:00 PM

Hey Faleshia, thnx for always reading and leaving comments on my writes...truly appreciated...Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2010 4:11:00 PM

Just wanted to say "hi" Faleshia and hope all is well with u.. will be going on vacation for my birthday on the 18 till the 31st so hope u are OK...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Derrick Burton

Date: 5/5/2010 5:43:00 AM

awesome short poetry and I hope that dragonn gets to blow any kind of fire anywhere. Have a great day.:)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/4/2010 8:57:00 AM

For sure does, Faleshia! Interesting write and good luck in the contest...Have a great time...Gert

Zera Masters

Date: 5/3/2010 12:56:00 PM

imagery is amazing.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2010 10:44:00 AM

From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing Faleshia. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2010 6:55:00 PM

All the best in the contest. Nice expressions

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 5:23:00 PM

deep write, love the revenge, good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Travis Cotrel

Date: 5/2/2010 2:35:00 PM

Hello Faly. reading your poems, take a look at mine. Love ya.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/2/2010 2:13:00 PM

A sure winner Faleshia.. an excellent depiction of the photo... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry always... good luck ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/2/2010 11:42:00 AM

Great Senryu for the contest. Good luck.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2010 11:31:00 AM

Great that should do well in the contest...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara