Poesy Relish Poet Dizain

Heaven - Dizzain Me

People dream of their own heaven
Where happiness dwells and time suspends
No more tears or life barren
Where difference always mends
With nature so calm and beauty surrounds.

In this remote terrain of dreary sand
Distanced from my dream at hand 
I dwell in the nostalgic past and moan!
Alas! how can I make you understand
The heaven that is my motherland grown!!!

© Nadiya (20 Jan '15)

*Won 3rd place on 4 Feb 2015 in the contest 'Dizzain Me' by Dr. Ram Mehta

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:40 AM Poesy~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE* Poesy Relish February 15, 2015 at 12:12 PM Thank you very much dear friend.

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2015 at 10:54 PM Congratulations. I enjoyed reading YOUR thoughts on heaven. Poesy Relish February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM Dear Andrea ... thank you very much for your lovely words on my poems... nad!

Sandra Haight February 3, 2015 at 3:12 PM Yes, Nadiya...heaven is where your heart is for sure. Congratulations on your fine win for your beautifully-written Dizain! Hugs, Sandra Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 3:28 PM Thank you very much Sandra for your nice words... lov, nad!

Mohan Chutani February 3, 2015 at 12:07 PM heavenly memories in the nostalgic past. congrats Nads. Mohan

Mohan Chutani February 3, 2015 at 12:07 PM heavenly memories in the nostalgic past. congrats Nads. Mohan Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 12:37 PM Thank you Mohan..

Earl Schumacker February 3, 2015 at 10:50 AM Hi Nad! Great job. Great win. Congratulations. It was enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 11:27 AM Thank you Earl... pleased that you enjoyed the read... have a nice day... nad!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 3, 2015 at 7:41 AM Congrats Nad on win. God bless. Love)))))rajat Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 8:27 AM Thank you very much friend... nad!

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 6:42 AM Such a beautiful write - many congrats Nadiya:-) hugs Jan x Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 6:54 AM Thank yoy Jan.. its a pleasure to see your comments on my poems

Dr.Ram Mehta February 3, 2015 at 5:29 AM Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Nadiya Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 6:54 AM Thank you Dr. Ram for this contest

Skat A January 24, 2015 at 11:23 PM This is one breathtaking poem, Nadiya. I'm thinking I love this place called heaven. Love SKAT Poesy Relish January 25, 2015 at 6:04 AM We all do dear friend... thank you once again.lov nad!

Arlene Smith January 22, 2015 at 1:04 PM Beautiful, dear friend!.. We all have our personal heavens.... Sure to be a winner... Hugs.. Arlene Poesy Relish January 22, 2015 at 1:06 PM Thank you Arlene... pleased that u like my poem... lov,nad!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 21, 2015 at 8:26 AM For me the winner what better heaven can be than motherland...Kudos.Love>Your friend Poesy Relish January 21, 2015 at 12:53 PM Thank you Rajat... your comments are always encouraging... lov, nad!

Fariq Yusoff January 21, 2015 at 4:37 AM I love your perspective on what heaven is. "Where difference always mends" - Simplistic Bliss. " Where happiness dwells and time suspends" - love this line. Poesy Relish January 21, 2015 at 5:41 AM Thank you Fariq for your encouraging comment and the visit... it means a lot.. best wishes, nad!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2015 at 4:09 AM - Everyone has a picture of his own heaven ..... but who knows ...... I agree with Peter - A truly beautiful poem, Nadiya - I wish you luck in the contest, hoping you'll win - Have a lovely day my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Poesy Relish January 21, 2015 at 5:39 AM Thank you Anne-Lise, may your idea of a heaven come true... hugs n lov, nad!