Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

Heaven Crying

March 13 2011



                                         a small drop of rain..
                                     all alone falls on my hand..
                                       its taste has some pain..

                                         several more splash..
                                     now I'm covered in sorrow..
                                            its Heaven crying..

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March 13, 2011 at 8:26 AM Beautiful write Michael, this will go to my fav's. Alexa

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 13, 2011 at 8:00 AM Oh how perfect is this piece today Michael.. something so needed and u were inspired to provide it... many many view these elegant words and message of Heaven crying .. deeply moving luv.. your Jersey Girl in amazed mode .. forever and always by your words luv..

Carolyn Devonshire March 13, 2011 at 7:29 AM A beautiful poem, Michael. Like the comparison of tears to rain. I've always thought of rain as heaven's tears. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2011 at 7:03 AM I am sure that heaven does cry at what is being done on earth..Enjoyed reading your thoughts this morn...Thanks for stopping by my silly work..Sara

Nette Onclaud March 13, 2011 at 6:48 AM oh my... tearing me apart with this heart-tugging piece, michael... soulful! :) huggs, nette