Heaven By Design

Heaven By Design

Women are wonderfully designed like angels bangles   
Soft tingling sounds glow on, with spiritually profound beliefs
Beautifully flying on the wing their hair in tangles                                             
Floating on a puff of air on snow white leaves
They offer souls warm comfort and relief
When women walk their feet don’t seem to touch the ground
With all that shopping, cooking and flying all around
A touch of heaven is in their eyes to melt the ice
They calculate the peace precise, in color and design, on angles sharp and sound
Playing harps in heaven, women's calculations right, in paradise are nice

Created on 1/26/15 for Dr. Mehta’s – “Dizain Me” Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 15, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Earl ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*
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February 6, 2015 at 10:52 PM
ahhh, this is a sweet sweet poem. Love it. Congratulations.
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February 7, 2015 at 3:59 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think the best poems come from the heart. This was a fun write for me. Have a wonderful week end. Earl
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February 3, 2015 at 3:03 PM
Hi Earl, I love your take on this theme! Such wonderful words of praise to women. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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February 3, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you so much. I enjoyed your poem also. It was great. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl
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February 3, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Earl ,a 7 on this beautiful write. Eve
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February 3, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Hi Eve, Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and rating. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl
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February 3, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Congrats on your win Earl. God bless you.Rajat
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February 3, 2015 at 11:28 AM
Hi Rajat, Thanks. Mine was good. Yours was great. Congratulations to you on your excellent win. Your dizain was the best of the best. Have a great day. Earl
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February 3, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Loved Your write Earl... congrats on your win... nad!
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February 3, 2015 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Earl. Take care.
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February 3, 2015 at 11:10 AM
Hi Nad, Thank you so much. I enjoyed your winning creation in this contest as well. Congratulations to you too on your excellent poem and win. Have a pleasant day. Take care. Earl
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 6:39 AM
Ohh Earl I do like the theme you chose - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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February 3, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Hi Jan, Thank you. Congratulations to you too on your excellent win. I see we both chose heaven. You can never have too much heaven. Have a wonderful day. Earl
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February 3, 2015 at 5:27 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Earl
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February 3, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Thank you so much. I'm happy with the way it turned out. Have a great day. Earl
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January 26, 2015 at 2:24 PM
- A beautiful ode to the woman, Earl - I wish you best of luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)
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January 26, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Hi Anne Lise, Thank you so much. It is my first "Dizain" poem. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Take care. Earl
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