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Heaven and Hell

Heavens brightest light She's the one thing to save Hells dullest knight Who tries so hard to be brave He's got no armor no sword He's left to die He has to speak not a single word She just knows he shall try He will try to keep her alive Her happiness sustains this knight Her happiness is for what he will strive He will go through any fight To keep her safe and sound For without her He would fade into history

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/17/2015 3:46:00 PM
Epic write Jason, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2015 2:42:00 PM
This is a very good poem Jason, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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