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Heaven

Written March 8th, 2016 Set fire to the rain Gasoline and symmetry Watch the flames rise over dewdrops Hear my horn part the sea On days with low visibility Mile horizons comfort me When clouds can incubate my history If I gave everything up Count to one hundred ninety three One for every mile That I'm away from heaven Would you still love me If I gave everything up Could I take you, take you with me You've taken another piece of me Made me give everything up You say it's payment to feel free If freedom comes in yellow paint Then swerve in one, two, three "The closest thing to heaven Is what you mean to me You really won't mind heaven Just hope you're dying to see me"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/16/2016 3:22:00 PM
brandon carter, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/9/2016 3:36:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing your poem here today, Brandon. This is filled with longing.
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