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Heaven

How lovely indeed Do you see the white light I asked my friend, I have forgotten his name He answered not I turned my head and searched for him He was dead on the road Next to a burning car What the Hell I turned my head towards the light again And was pulled towards it I flew, at the speed of light Towards some place, oh so lovely Too lovely to describe But I shall try my best to I stopped my flight in front of a gate A huge one it was, made of crystals A being stood by it, he must be an angel He was so beautiful, with golden curly hair With the face of a child And with eyes oh so blue, so sparkling He had the body of a five year old He looked at me and smiled Anoucheka, said he, get in, we were waiting for you Where am I, what happened to my friend You are in heaven, your friend stayed on Earth Am I dead Death does not exist, said he, beings do not die Life is just a journey, and after beings leave their bodies on Earth Why, they do come to heaven if they do deserve it Come, do not waste any time, come inside Oh how lovely, heaven was like a huge green garden There were trees of all sorts, flowers and green green grass There were all sorts of animals playing around Pandas, lions, birds and butterflies, all living peacefully Cause here, none does seem to need food The beings were so good looking Maidens looked like fairies except that they did not have wings They were all slim, tall and fair and all had the same sparkling eyes Men were oh so handsome, with dark curly hair and so perfect bodies Everyone was engaged in some sort of activity Everyone was indulging in some sort of play The atmosphere was one so gay The skies were blue and red and yellow and purple too And there were around ten suns But the garden needed not this light Nor was the air too warm and stuffy Nor was it uncomfortable I looked at myself in a river and saw that I looked as the others Tall, fair, slim, dark hair and sparkling eyes Anoucheka I heard my name again And saw, oh dear me, I saw, my uncle, my grandfather, all those who had left the Earth They were so happy, they looked so peaceful Why do you cry, all the others will come here as well Fret not, come, we shall take you to the Lord He was there, seated on a golden throne He looked so imposing, so majestic, with his golden crown, his white hair His understanding eyes Welcome, he said, do enjoy your stay in my eternal land! I opened my eyes in the hospital and heard someone say Doctor, the patient is conscious. 28 Nov 2015

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Date: 12/2/2015 11:54:00 PM
AG, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/2/2015 10:50:00 PM
Wonderful write Anoucheka! Congrats on superb win!!
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations Anoucheka.
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Date: 12/2/2015 9:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win and thank you for being a part of my contest-lu *smiles*
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:33:00 PM
Thk you so much Laura :)

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