Laura Leiser Poet Dizain

Notes About The Poem

For Dizain Me Poetry Contest

by Dr. Ram Mehta

Written by Laura Leiser

1/20/2015

Heaven

In a far off realm beyond the reaches of mankind,
Therein dwells a magnificent place called Heaven.
It's beauty more glorious than anyone could find,
To reward those with faith which God has given,
Who upon death will join Christ where He is risen.

With mighty trumpet blast heard upon the earth below,
Wheat will separate from chaff and all will be made known.
Those who enter heaven's doors released from their strife,
Those who reject the Truth to Hades' gates are shown,
Yet those who endure until the end receive eternal life.








Written on 1/20/2015

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:40 AM Hi Laura~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2015 at 10:56 PM omg, I glanced down as I was getting off and saw that I parroted Jan's words exactly. that was NOT intentional. So this truly was heavenly!!

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2015 at 10:55 PM a heavenly write! Congrats on the fine win. Laura Leiser February 6, 2015 at 11:23 PM Thanks very much, Andrea! I appreciate your sweet comments!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 3, 2015 at 7:42 AM Hi Laura Congrats on win. love>rajat Laura Leiser February 3, 2015 at 1:32 PM Thank you so much, Rajat! I really enjoyed your beautiful poem as well, and congratulations on your win, too!

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 6:41 AM A heavenly write - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser February 3, 2015 at 1:34 PM Thank you, Jan! I also enjoyed your poem about the heavenly bubble bath! Congrats on your win as well!

Dr.Ram Mehta February 3, 2015 at 5:30 AM Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Laura Laura Leiser February 3, 2015 at 1:35 PM Thank you, Dr. Ram! I enjoyed your contest and learning how to write a Dizain poem. You are a great poet, as well!

Emile Pinet January 29, 2015 at 7:22 PM The words are clever and have a gentle and somewhat familiar pitch to help the reader release control over to the words and feel them within. Emile. Laura Leiser February 3, 2015 at 1:36 PM Thank you for your kind comment, Emile! You are a wonderful poet as well, and I've enjoyed reading your works.

David Meade January 29, 2015 at 1:50 PM Mighty are your words . . . what a destination!! Lovely filled with hope and beauty. Sorry I missed this earlier. 7 Laura Leiser January 29, 2015 at 3:35 PM Thank you so much for your comment, David! I really appreciate it.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 21, 2015 at 2:20 PM Well done, Laura! I'm still trying to come up with a poem for this one...I love the form...hugs, Rhonda Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 21, 2015 at 11:35 PM Yes, I understand. My more Biblical writes are usually the least popular, but I try to follow my heart. Laura Leiser January 21, 2015 at 3:29 PM Thank you, Rhonda! I took aore Biblical approach to the idea of heaven. It may not be "popular" but I want to give the topic justice based on what I believe as a Christian.