Heaven

would taste like your lips
nirvana, the way I feel
when I am with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 7, 2012 at 2:29 PM
JB.... wow...what a cross over...sweet..pd
Poet Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Heaven nicely captured in these lines.Enjoyed.
Hill Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 5:55 AM
someone has some sweet lips..nice write JB..TAH
Mannan Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 5:39 AM
Wow, this is one awesomr poem. You have beautifully managed to put all the emotions in this. Love it.
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 5:31 AM
Nice novel definition of nirvana, B.J.
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