Heaven

HEAVEN

The world is filled with love and hate, for this is not what the
lord had wanted to create, he set us free from all our sins and
when we die thats when our souls truely begin, as our bodies
lye deep in theground, our souls soars high past the clouds on
our way to the heavens grounds,we stand in front of his golden
gate,and enter through to his beauty full state, we stand in front of him and kneel to the ground, as we thank him for letting us walk HIS whole world around.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Macdonald Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 3:10 PM
I am so proud of you, Mom. You have been such an inspiration in my life and I love you more than words can describe. It's 9-30-12 5:10pm. I love you!!
Burton Avatar
August 4, 2008 at 2:27 PM
wow,never saw anyone judge themselfs.pretty scary actually.
Macdonald Avatar
August 2, 2008 at 11:41 PM
I really enjoy reading your poery. I wish I had the abbility to do what your doing. AMBER REID.
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