Heaven

Heaven is what God needs it to be
Different for you and different for me
To the baby, Heaven is in its mothers arms
Safe from fright, safe from all harm
To the soldier, Heaven is his homeland
Not in this foxhole in the sand
To the lovely young bride
Heaven is her groom by her side
To the old man, Heaven is his beautiful wife
Who he will join when he leaves this life
To the child, Heaven is a bag of sweets
Toys and games and lots of treats
To the prisoner, Heaven is to be set free
Never to be judged by you or by me
Heaven could be walking on a golden street
Or dancing with a new love you recently meet
To a mother, Heaven is her family
Under her wings tucked safely
To the sick, Heaven is to be cured
Another chance at life secured
To me, Heaven is surrounded by love
With my Father up above

To God Heaven is communion with all who love him
For eternity never coming to an end

Our pens can never quite describe Heaven's glory
That is the mystery of God's grand story
But he says he will prepare for us a majestic place
A Heaven full of his love and his grace. 

Submitted for "Describe Heaven poetry contest"
Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal
09/11/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ajmal Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 2:45 AM
I absolutely love your take on the contest, believe me that you have taken it to the whole new level and your poem sure was a masterpiece, many congratulations on your wonderful 2nd position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Mcguire Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:19 AM
Thank you for the kind most words! Greatly appreciated, best to you and yours.
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Wonderful imagery of heaven, Timothy, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
Mcguire Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Thank you very much Eve. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 2:56 PM
I agree about your thoughts of heaven Timothy. Beautifully composed! Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )
Mcguire Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Thank you very much Connie!
Gauthier Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thank you friend
Mcconnell Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 5:02 PM
A lovely piece Timothy, very well penned with nice rhyme and flow. I like your picture of heaven, so very true indeed. Have blessed day,Gordon
Mcguire Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Thanks Gordon, Bless you and yours!
Gauthier Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Timothy.Superbly done.
Mcguire Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Thank you for the nice comment and visit friend.
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 2:29 AM
Lovely description and how true. Heaven on earth, a taste of what's to come.
Mcguire Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 3:02 PM
You are absolutely correct friend!
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