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Heaven

The shift to heaven in the twinkling of an eye. The dramatic mood and light as I wave goodbye. Lifted past Everest and stars where no one can reach, Except by salvation, where the Lord’s land of speech — By his word we were created, by his word elevated. Sinners cling to clouds, weeping, pleasure truncated. I pass them, blow kisses but they swear and swat them away. The light in me from heavenly glow still hoped to sway Those lost to him. Clouds become steps of diamond delight. I climb effortlessly, hearing sweet sounds of wings in flight. I reach heaven’s pearlescent gate, with invitation in hand. No need to knock, I’m expected. The choir sings, the glorious band plays music that has colors. Sight and sound, magnificently connected. Tears now flow from me as I see, in all his glory, the resurrected. The room overflows with my own generation - family, friends, celebrities, Also the obscure and hidden gems — all of them — life’s complexities. There’s no hurry here but to enjoy, reminisce about angels in disguise. Hugs and kisses each have their chance, and still not the best surprise. I’m shown my mansion. It will take me a long time to explore. It’s breathtaking! It tickles every nuance of my soul to the core. Silver and golden books, trees of every kind, flowers and scent so penetrating, providing me instantly with unceasing contentment. Jasper walls, city of pure gold, city walls of precious stones, twelve pearl gates, golden streets like transparent glass and no bones. God’s glory lights up the magnificent city that is illuminated with blessings. No curses, nor darkness, no death, no tears, perfect, no second guessing. 8/22/2018 Describe Heaven Poetry Contest 3rd place (multiple placements)

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Date: 9/19/2018 2:49:00 AM
Jesus said in 14th chapter of John that "there are many palaces in my fathers home, if there wouldn't be so, I wouldn't have told you and I am going there to prepare a place for you" so sure heaven will be full of palaces and when these earthly houses can amaze us, think how amazing that mansion of heaven shall be, anyways your poem was absolutely wonderful and certainly a joy to read, many congratulations on your 3rd position in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2018 4:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Faraz! Be blessed! <3
Date: 9/17/2018 5:26:00 PM
Very nice, Kim, and congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thank you, Carole!
Date: 9/16/2018 7:32:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of heaven, Kim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2018 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!:)
Date: 9/16/2018 6:27:00 PM
I enjoyed your journey leaving earth and entering past Heaven's pearly gates...So full of joy and wonders we can only imagine, and you did well in helping us to do so. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! <3 Kim
Date: 9/16/2018 3:38:00 PM
Your vision of heaven is breathtaking Kim! My mother had a NDE and said it was so peaceful and wonderful you want to stay. You immediately depart from earthly cares, even your children. After that she had no fear of death. Congratulations on your placement! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2018 7:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie, and for sharing your mom’s story.
Date: 9/16/2018 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Line!

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