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How elated I’d feel if you were to grant my wish Once we had eaten that sumptuous seafood dish. You leave the vale and take me slowly up the hill A wonder of heather growing in glades all fill. Today is just a fine great day, with barely a breeze We’ll leave behind down in the vale all stately trees. We’ll find a dry rock and rest a while up on the hill Admire the vista of trees and yonder hear the melody of a rill. But best of all I love the heather and love its lighter scent Yet more I admire the various colours and I’m content. So, darling make me happy as we go up the sloping incline Let me admire nature’s best as we roam the heather fine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/16/2021 3:03:00 AM
Heather on a hillside under dappled light, is a wonderful experience...Delice
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Date: 12/15/2021 11:02:00 AM
Around here are the blue bonnets around the fields, they are so beautiful. Great romantic verse, my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/15/2021 6:26:00 AM
Lovely walk through the heather, Victor:) you bring the magic alive with your words:)
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Date: 12/14/2021 6:40:00 PM
Victor, that would be a nice romantic walk.
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:45:00 PM
Wonderful poetry Victor, how lovely to walk up that hill admiring the beautiful heather… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 12/14/2021 4:32:00 PM
Great imagery and fine poetry, Victor. A fine afternoon. A poet friend, Bill
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Date: 12/14/2021 3:02:00 PM
Wonderful write Victor, best wishes
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Date: 12/14/2021 11:10:00 AM
This poem is simply beautiful, Victor. I love the heather on the hill! Nice writing.
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Date: 12/14/2021 11:03:00 AM
The freshness of lovely natural surroundings combine with the freshness of romance, in this delightful tale of love's meanderings.
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Date: 12/14/2021 8:38:00 AM
Got lost in the beauty of the fine vista of heather. We don't have it here. Love your poetry on the beauty of nature. I always feel happy to be in the lap of mother nature
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Date: 12/14/2021 8:07:00 AM
You bring us, Victor, to beautiful settings, scented and fruitful for the eyes. ~ hugs
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Date: 12/14/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thanks for ushering us on a delightful journey through nature via your eyes, Victor. This poem is well-crafted as usual.
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:46:00 AM
Much elation in this walk up the hill. Enjoyed the scenic journey through your eyes. Expertly crafted, as always, Victor.
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Date: 12/14/2021 2:23:00 AM
You take the reader on a walk to be at one with nature, I remember when I went to Scotland the hills were a lovely purple colour. Tom
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