L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Heat Wave

Under this brilliant clear blue sky
A smoldering heat has descended,
Humidity so high I think I shall die
Under this brilliant clear blue sky
Electricity is now in short supply,
And, overuse of water is rescinded
Under this brilliant clear blue sky,
A smoldering heat has descended. 

Written June 16, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger June 18, 2022 at 7:20 PM In Kansas this is not funny - cattle are dying by the thousands in dry feedlots here - this is serious! Nice that you picked up on what I have been thinking this week L Milton Hankins June 18, 2022 at 7:26 PM Thank you, Caren. I know there is great concern during this heat wave throughout the country. We had a small break in the heat this weekend, but it is supposed to resume this coming week.

Eve Roper June 17, 2022 at 1:15 PM Our days seem to get worse, so under the shade for me L Milton Hankins June 17, 2022 at 1:16 PM I'm with you, Eve. I can't handle the hot, humid air.

Marco Chies June 17, 2022 at 12:50 AM Winter hasn't started here yet and temperatures close to zero degrees celsius are quite annoying! L Milton Hankins June 17, 2022 at 7:28 AM I'd say so, Marco. I hope you don't have a brutal winter. Apparently it is getting an early start, though.

Jeff Connelly June 17, 2022 at 12:45 AM L Milton this poem is like Shock & Awe. Brilliantly put to the proper poetic form. Here it's the rainy season SO no complaints. Thanks... Jeff Connelly June 17, 2022 at 8:42 AM Presently I'm in Colombia, South America... L Milton Hankins June 17, 2022 at 7:29 AM I don't know where you are, Jeff. We had a rather wet spring, but are under a blistering heat wave right now. Temperatures are supposed to moderate this weekend. Thanks for the read and your comment.

Tom Cunningham June 16, 2022 at 12:57 PM Going to hit 30c tomorrow, I avoid the direct hear, my lying on a beach days are over, You'll find me under a tree, heading off to Turkey next week where it will be 40c plus. And ill be swapping an oak tree for a palm tree lol. Tom Tom Cunningham June 16, 2022 at 1:48 PM No, but we have an apartment there and hoping to sell it when we go, had it for ten years now and decided we didn't want the hassle any more as we're getting older. Had some great times there and made many friends. L Milton Hankins June 16, 2022 at 12:58 PM Have a great trip, Tom. I'd love to visit Turkey. Do you have family there? Enjoy yourself. We miss you when you're away.

Jeff Kyser June 16, 2022 at 12:22 PM I finished up my concrete work yesterday afternoon - it was 97 with a heat index of 107! I find if I can keep replacing the water lost sweating, I can keep going if the work isn't too strenuous. Yes, I wish there was a little more cloud cover and a little less brilliant clear blue... L Milton Hankins June 16, 2022 at 12:30 PM Well, just be sure you are staying dehydrated. You don't want a heat stroke! They can be very, very dangerous, as I'm sure you know.