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Heat Exhaustion

Out of water for three days; desert life, Delirious with heat. Exhaustion overwhelming! 16 Feb 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/12/2015 2:14:00 AM

Wonderful expressions David, few lines much said! Congrats on awesome win!

Skat A

Date: 8/12/2015 1:59:00 AM

nice win....SK

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2015 1:18:00 AM

C.M., Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

John Lawless

Date: 2/16/2015 5:04:00 PM

..I'll be back....just needed a drink of water. .... Concise and compact, well done.

C.M. Davidson-Pickett
Date: 2/16/2015 7:40:00 PM

And you didn't bring me one? Still I suffer... ;-)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/16/2015 2:03:00 PM

Such vivid description is so few words:-) Hugs Jan xxx

C.M. Davidson-Pickett
Date: 2/16/2015 3:48:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! Hugs...