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Heat Exhaustion

Out of water for three days; desert life,
Delirious with heat.
Exhaustion overwhelming!


16 Feb 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 12, 2015 at 2:14 AM

Wonderful expressions David, few lines much said! Congrats on awesome win!

Skat A

August 12, 2015 at 1:59 AM

nice win....SK

Poet Destroyer A

August 12, 2015 at 1:18 AM

C.M., Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~