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Hearts Like An Egg

They`re heart`s like an egg forever hardboiled, friends that betrayed, dreams that were foiled. Protecting it`s shell and those whom were loyal, toys of their youth, their health, all now spoiled spoiled. They`re heart`s like an egg forever hardboiled. Decisions, regrets, a life of turmoil, choices, bad bets, and days of hard toil, they fall to their beds, body in coil. They`re heart`s like an egg, forever hardboiled. Doing their best only turning up roiled. Controversial at best, always embroiled, and they no longer fear, being planted in soil.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 5/8/2019 12:14:00 AM

a simply great piece of work

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 5/8/2019 5:03:00 AM

Thank you for reading and your kind words Mahtab.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/23/2019 5:06:00 PM

Hello Charlie Kowlton, no you were not arrogant. Ther is nothing wrong with this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/24/2019 5:59:00 PM

You are very welcomed my friend.Have a nice evening.

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 3/23/2019 5:52:00 PM

Thank you Darlene…I had forgotten about this poem until your response. I appreciate you reading and your feedback.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/14/2018 9:17:00 AM

I love this poem, Charlie. Beautiful flow. Evidence of a very seasoned life. We can all relate and it is proof of much wisdom when one is ready or the final trip. You deserve another beer, my friend. A lovely poem. Line xx

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 4/14/2018 12:44:00 PM

Thank you. After rereading this morning I felt it was somewhat arrogant, hence the changes.