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Hearts Faded With Time

Hearts faded with time. Skinny jeans and smokey air The sound of laughter and pool balls on a table The smell of damp carpet and stale beer Full ashtrays and sweaty skin Those were the dives I lived in Youngsters eager for adventure Dark alleys and hallways High heals and red lipstick Firemen and cops My first love Ice cold beer in a tall glass Uncomfortable wooden bar stools against an uneven stone floor Names of high school sweethearts inscribed on the counter top Hearts faded with time One of them was mine….

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Date: 9/13/2018 12:07:00 PM
This made me smile nicely put ~Jeff
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Maxie Macdonald
Date: 9/14/2018 1:20:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/26/2018 4:00:00 PM
many people are sheep just following without stating their opinions... loved your piece, let's be ourselves to leave a mark after we're gone
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Date: 2/26/2018 3:57:00 PM
one of them was mine too... an experience most experience... loved it
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Maxie Macdonald
Date: 2/26/2018 11:42:00 PM
Thank you so much :) I have really good memories of my youth

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