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Hearts

In this land of broken hearts there are those who have learned the arts to destroy everything that we have worked for to break us down to our core to make us weak and they continue to wreak havoc on this world but, there is a girl that I wish to save from the darkness...but I'm not brave I'm not fearless but I have to be strong, unless I succumb to the numb to the cold and become old without saying how true it was when I said I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/29/2011 5:51:00 PM
I love this!! I know this feeling all to well. Thanks for sharing and congrats. Jodie Q
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Date: 1/25/2011 9:53:00 AM
Good twist on a familiar theme. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 1/25/2011 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 4:31:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with luv..
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Date: 9/14/2010 5:41:00 PM
Amazing brought tears to my eyes keep writing don't hold anything in let words out here if nowhere else
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Date: 8/5/2010 2:03:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup! The light is always on here. Check out some of my works if you have the time. I would like a fresh victim. I mean opinion. ;)
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Date: 8/5/2010 12:07:00 PM
I really enjoyed this rhyme. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 8/4/2010 8:57:00 PM
wonderful can feel the passion and need and meaning behind the words
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:34:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading a very creative write tonight and looking forward to many more.. with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:03:00 PM
Three little words so many find easy to say, until they have to prove they meant what they said. Excellent piece and an enjoyable read.
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