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Heartless Tired Disposable

The world looks empty, no lights on in the windows Just like the window to my heart, Dark and empty. Heartless. A single car drives by, A sleepy driver and half asleep passenger. Reminds me of relationships these days, Everyone getting bored. Tired. A stranger throws his empty coffee cup on the ground, That's how I feel, thrown away and forgotten. Disposable. I try to rid these feelings, but they are demons, Stuck in my mind, slowly taking over me. And they're stronger than me. They've won.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/5/2017 7:01:00 AM
Sounds awful. But you've used your metaphors well. Nicely done.
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Date: 11/27/2017 12:09:00 PM
Never let them win... never give in to the demons.. Well expressed Cassidy..
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Date: 11/26/2017 4:43:00 PM
no, keep up the fight, your words are a great weapon against these demons, great writing.
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Date: 11/20/2017 12:51:00 AM
A true picture in words of the hollow environment ... Nice poetic expression of the pain and anxiety ... but the demon must be kept at bay ...
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