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Heartfelt Haiku

long, pale, soft white necks tantalizing blue blue eyes giggling joy smiles sent of the green sea revives the lonely grey souls cuddles endlessly we lying next to us kindness, tenderness, warmness embracing lovers an entwined union two bodies converted one heartfelt memories

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Date: 11/2/2014 12:26:00 PM
These are beautiful!I love haiku!
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Dennis Rarick
Date: 11/2/2014 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Charmine, haiku is a beautiful form,i am still working on it
Date: 11/2/2014 2:16:00 AM
wow! you have created a wonderful string of sensual haiku - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Dennis Rarick
Date: 11/2/2014 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! I am kind of breaking with the convention, but thought it wasn't too bad to post.

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