Heartfelt Haiku

long, pale, soft white necks
tantalizing blue blue eyes
giggling joy smiles

sent of the green sea
revives the lonely grey souls
cuddles endlessly

we lying next to us
kindness, tenderness, warmness
embracing lovers

an entwined union
two bodies converted one
heartfelt memories
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 12:26 PM
These are beautiful!I love haiku!
Rarick Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:49 PM
Thanks Charmine, haiku is a beautiful form,i am still working on it
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 2:16 AM
wow! you have created a wonderful string of sensual haiku - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xxx
Rarick Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 3:50 PM
Thank you, Jan! I am kind of breaking with the convention, but thought it wasn't too bad to post.
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