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Heartfelt

For all the thoughts that lost their pull For reasons good and reasons cruel I stand a shell of who I was But shells are beautiful, just because Tossed and turned through years of waves Wading, for the tides must change This small crustacean drifts ashore Smoother now for all it saw

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Ben Burton

Date: 2/22/2015 11:43:00 AM

Wonderfully done. Said so much, so quickly!!

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/24/2015 8:10:00 AM

Thanks, Ben! : )

Lyn Murray

Date: 2/11/2015 2:46:00 AM

Oh, man - I really love this Jean! Hauntingly beautiful!! Lyn :`)

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/11/2015 2:03:00 PM

Thanks, Lyn!! :)

Kim Shaw

Date: 2/9/2015 7:02:00 PM

"I stand a shell of who I was But shells are beautiful, just because..." I absolutely love those lines; and can certainly relate to the sentiment. Very heartfelt. Hugs, Kim

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/10/2015 12:03:00 PM

Thank you, Kim!! It was so nice of you to stop in! : )

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/8/2015 9:58:00 AM

A poem with hidden meanings that flaunts reality and taps into our desires to be entertained by abstract thoughts. Emile. #7

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/8/2015 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Emile!! :)

Rob Bettridge

Date: 2/8/2015 9:31:00 AM

An excellent piece that has meaning with differing parallels. The graceful muse of a once beautiful woman, gradually grown old or someone forever changed by a traumatic event who acknowledges the mellowing effect that time has had on them, Over time.

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/8/2015 9:46:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and reading, glad you enjoyed! :)

Adell Foster

Date: 2/6/2015 10:01:00 PM

This is truly a captivating piece. the imagery is superb my friend. It is indeed a pleasure to had read for you, thank you Jean for sharing the write. Many Blessings, Always, Adell (7)

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/7/2015 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words - you warmed my heart.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/6/2015 9:26:00 PM

This is a wonderful piece of writing! 7. My heart felt it.

Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/7/2015 8:23:00 AM

THANK YOU!! I am so glad you stopped in and enjoyed!!! :)