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Heartbreaking Lesson

I left the convenience store with a bag of cashews, which I munched on my walk home. I came upon a squirrel foraging among the birds on the ground all alone. I tossed a cashew this squirrel's way, and the squirrel pounced on it right away. I tossed it another and then another one, and that's where this story takes a terrible turn, teaching me one of the hardest lessons I ever learned. Out from nowhere a hawk pounced on him. The poor little squirrel didn't even have time to scream. The hawk had mercifully killed it instantly. My selfishness in wanting to get closer to this adorable little critter of nature, caused its' unfortunate early departure. Had I stayed out of the picture and not distracted him, with my very delectable and very easy food source item, the squirrel would have been much more aware of its surroundings, and most likely would have noticed the hawk long before the hawk had even seen him. That day and the days after I spent in a deep depression. This moment of clarity was a very heartbreaking lesson. It's best to just leave Mother Nature alone to do her thing. Bad things inevitably can and will happen with humans interfering, no matter how good may be their intentions. Something Seemingly Insignificant and Unexpected Changed My Life Contest 08/20/2016

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Date: 9/2/2016 8:14:00 PM
SillyBilly, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/1/2016 8:12:00 AM
Such a sad event and one that stays with you! Nice writing.
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Date: 9/1/2016 7:27:00 AM
Congrats for your placement, with this sad and emotional piece...
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Date: 8/30/2016 3:27:00 AM
This is sad of course, but beautifully written. Congratulations on your win, Kai. PS: what colour are the squirrels in your neck of the woods?
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Billy Thekidster
Date: 8/31/2016 3:56:00 PM
The common gray squirrel rules here. Now and then you'll see a pitch black one or a completely white one but they are just mutations of the common gray squirrel and are the same specie. Thanks for your comment Kai
Date: 8/29/2016 6:35:00 PM
Oh dear, Billy, nature can often be cruel. What seems so innocent at the time, is just fate turned wrong. I hope it doesn't not continue to weigh on your mind. What a good way to express your compassion. :)
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Billy Thekidster
Date: 8/31/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Carrie, always nice hearing from you.
Date: 8/29/2016 1:24:00 PM
I agree that humans should just let nature be.Congrats on your placement Billy!
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Billy Thekidster
Date: 8/31/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank You Sara.
Date: 8/29/2016 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Billy! You placed 4 out of 100!
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Billy Thekidster
Date: 8/31/2016 3:51:00 PM
All I can say is "WoW, Thank You & I'm Honored.
Date: 8/19/2016 3:03:00 PM
a sad but well-told story. don't beat yourself up over it, though - that hawk may have gotten him anyway. still, you've made a good point...
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Date: 8/19/2016 11:30:00 AM
A hard lesson to learn Billy - such an innocent action can have unforeseen consequences:-( hugs Jan xx
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