Heartbreakers

Somewhere a heart is breaking
as a young girl is left all alone.
Friends call round to comfort her
as she sits there by the phone.
She’s waiting there for him
in the hope that its not goodbye.
But he’s not coming home again
he's leaving her there to cry.

He made the sun shine in her heart
making each day feel fresh and new.
But a cold wind has blown over her
and now grey clouds cover the blue.
Sometimes the guys out there
make me ashamed to be a man.
Breaking those young girls hearts
then running as fast as they can.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kitchen Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Thank you Carol
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 11:28 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent but sad poetry this beautiful morning Tim. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. May your day be full of inspiration. Love, Carol
Kitchen Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Very true Sara. my daughter has just been a victim. Tim
Kendrick Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Yes, they should just say from the start I am not just that in to you instead of leading them on...Sara
Kitchen Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Thank you DR.Ram
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 4:25 AM
Very creative aND PASSIONATE love with its feelings, Tim
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