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Heartbreakers

Somewhere a heart is breaking as a young girl is left all alone. Friends call round to comfort her as she sits there by the phone. She’s waiting there for him in the hope that its not goodbye. But he’s not coming home again he's leaving her there to cry. He made the sun shine in her heart making each day feel fresh and new. But a cold wind has blown over her and now grey clouds cover the blue. Sometimes the guys out there make me ashamed to be a man. Breaking those young girls hearts then running as fast as they can.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/13/2010 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Carol
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Date: 10/13/2010 11:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent but sad poetry this beautiful morning Tim. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. May your day be full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2010 8:00:00 AM
Very true Sara. my daughter has just been a victim. Tim
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Date: 10/13/2010 7:12:00 AM
Yes, they should just say from the start I am not just that in to you instead of leading them on...Sara
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Date: 10/13/2010 6:14:00 AM
Thank you DR.Ram
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Date: 10/13/2010 4:25:00 AM
Very creative aND PASSIONATE love with its feelings, Tim
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