Heartbreak -Version2

Can I stay asleep? When my eyes are closed I’m happy In my dreams Everything is perfect [Chorus] But that’s why they’re called dreams Because nothing is real And they always shatter into A thousand pieces And that’s the sting of Reality I want to go back to sleep I don’t like this feeling I’ve lost you already I hate it And my dreams have died [Chorus] [Refrain] This is Reality I hate it Reality It sucks [Chorus]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 13, 2013 at 11:40 AM
Dear Rebecca, YOUR POETIC Artistry is unique. The combination of Version 1 and 2 completes the sorrow and loss YOU feel in YOUR Heart. Very Beautiful Pen. YOU have Captivated my POETIC Heart. I see YOU will be a Great Asset to the SOUP.Again WELCOME.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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October 21, 2012 at 10:05 AM
Another wonderful lyric...like it lots. I can bet the song is killer too...great stuff!!!
Breidenthal Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 1:28 PM
Reality, in a way, does suck! Well, to think of it positively, it could be a gift... - David
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February 5, 2012 at 6:57 AM
This would make a great song : )
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February 4, 2012 at 10:06 PM
Oooooooh. Do you have a tune??? :D Skype meh. Always, Laura
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