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Heartbreak On Repeat

I think this is one of my dumbest flows ever/ Cause it's a heartbreak I allow to repeat forever/ Refusin to quit, my loyalty is undying/ Heart doesn't wanna realize that it's lying/ To the logic, to my brain, to my god damn sanity/ Meaningless teases inflates my damn vanity/ Why can't you get her out your god damn head/ Why can't you choose another girl to love instead/ A self-deprecating angel is the saddest thing I've seen/ I Appreciate the beauty in HD on the widest screen/ My perception is perfection/ her perception is rejection/

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Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 8:17:00 PM

Juan,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/5/2014 6:31:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Juan. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2014 6:13:00 PM

Juan,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/1/2014 6:38:00 AM

oh!!! a clamoring write for release and moving on... :) perhaps you can read my poem gone and as it's like this..:) WARM WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP!!! I have been here bout two years now and I really am having fun and lots of learning here more than poetry itself but life.. :D i hope you will enjoy it here as I do.. :) God bless you >> :)olive eloisa

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/1/2014 4:19:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Juan :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)