Heartbreak Countdown

Ten unread messages and nine missed calls later

I finally texted eight friends to call you a lying traitor.

Please don’t leave me, I’m not strong enough to grieve

Our seven birthdays together or the six promises that you would never leave.

You bought your ticket with a five then took my heart away for free.

My watch struck four, but you had disappeared by three.

As the hours went on, I stared fixedly ahead at the sun

And slowly lost sight of you while two sets of footprints became one.
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