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Heartbreak

Heartbreak I didn’t want my heart to break, but my boyfriend was such a snake. I wanted to let go, but my heart told me no. I thought we would be forever, but now we are not together. He made me go crazy, I felt a bit hazy. I knew that he would break my heart, he got in my head from the start. First he made my heart race, then trapped it in a case. All my friends say that he is wrong, and they know that I am strong. To forget from the start, because he broke my heart.

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Skat A

Date: 6/24/2015 1:19:00 AM

Hi Sarah, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2015 3:35:00 PM

Sarah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/22/2015 2:32:00 PM

- Welcome to P Soup, Sarah ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Alexander Seal

Date: 6/22/2015 6:43:00 AM

Really good - reminds me of a song I enjoy.