Heartbreak

I felt my heart break when he said goodbye I couldn’t help but start to cry Broken pieces fell to the floor as I watched him walk out the door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 15, 2026 at 9:13 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 24, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Kelsey Bailey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 3:15 PM
KELSEY, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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