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Heartbreak

Running through the forest green shadows fall across a scene Beating, pumping red and black dripping pouring from the attack A hinted smile, one sad tear eyes look on with a glinted leer Natural beauty inside and out torn apart and thrown about Slowly pieces start to form somewhat resembling what once was norm Joy and anger closely relate the smile and tear retaliate The wooded green has peace once more as red and black become reborn All is quiet once again, it finally now has come to an end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/1/2017 7:58:00 PM
Thank you all so much for support, it thrills my heart all the lovely comments I've received!
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Date: 1/13/2011 5:34:00 PM
welcome my friend nice work here thank you
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:52:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. very interesting theme... hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out the contests too... good luck with luv..
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:24:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Toni. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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