Heartbreak

I told the child, "I love you so." He said in return, "Yeah, I know!"

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/30/2025 11:38:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

david Low
Date: 5/1/2025 9:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Beata. I'm a Christian myself, and may God bless you too in all that you do. By the way, this little rhyme was meant to be a bit tongue-in-cheek, as it was inspired by an interaction with my little nephew, lol :)