Heartbreak



memories muddled 
in night’s stillness, lost love haunts
The scorpion’s sting, pains









By Zyrool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 10:23 AM
I have never been stung by a scorpion, but I can imagine it in comparing it to lost love. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I hope it is not an event in your life today. Sara K
Gifford Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Thanks for reading. It did happen in the days of youth, not the scorpion bite though, just comparing. Enjoy your day/evening my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 4:48 PM
It is well told anguish of love
Gifford Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Thank you so much,Hilda. Wishing you a fabulous new week ahead, my friend.
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