Heartbreak

memories muddled in night’s stillness, lost love haunts The scorpion’s sting, pains By Zyrool

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2024 10:23:00 AM

I have never been stung by a scorpion, but I can imagine it in comparing it to lost love. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I hope it is not an event in your life today. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 8/10/2024 10:39:00 AM

Thanks for reading. It did happen in the days of youth, not the scorpion bite though, just comparing. Enjoy your day/evening my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/4/2024 4:48:00 PM

It is well told anguish of love

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 8/5/2024 12:53:00 AM

Thank you so much,Hilda. Wishing you a fabulous new week ahead, my friend.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/1/2024 5:43:00 AM

Awesome senryu Zyrool. The scorpion stings, but we survive

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 8/1/2024 5:57:00 AM

Hi Tom, Happy new month. Thank you for your kind words and your note about the type of poem. My inexperience shows. Much appreciated, my friend. Stay Blessed.