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Heartbreak

I lived and loved, hurt and ached pained my heart to watch it break. Gave it all, got none in return to build a life and watch it burn. Be it right or wrong, my destiny astray to do it over endlessly as time just ticks away. If I knew then, what I know now I'd saved my love someway, somehow. Written by: Jessica Thompson Date: 10/29/19

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Gideon Foli

Date: 3/27/2020 2:19:00 AM

It hurts to give your heart in love and not receive any in return. Awesomely impressive Jezz. Keep them coming my dear friend.

Jt Nyx
Date: 5/19/2020 2:44:00 PM

Thank you Gideon for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Take care my friend. Jess

Muddasar Javad

Date: 1/1/2020 12:33:00 AM

Excellent..! Nicely penned poem here :) love it.

Jt Nyx
Date: 2/16/2020 1:24:00 PM

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Jess :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/19/2019 10:54:00 PM

Cool poem :) -JT

Jt Nyx
Date: 2/16/2020 1:23:00 PM

Thank you , glad you liked it. Jess :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/4/2019 8:59:00 PM

Jessica you couldn’t have ended this perfectly! I love the tune to this piece...it flows beautifully!!!

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/5/2019 1:32:00 PM

Really appreciate all the kind words on this piece. I am glad you stopped in and enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful week. Jess

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/3/2019 6:35:00 AM

This has a nice beat to it, like a heart beat, these words are felt.

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/3/2019 6:31:00 PM

Thank you Casarah, always appreciate your kind and thoughtful words. Have a great weekend Jess

Oluwadamilare Adedayo

Date: 11/1/2019 10:35:00 PM

Hmm, what makes you a paradigm of love is primarily what you have to offer and not what you are offered. And going through this piece, I can surely say you are one. Love itself will pain your days in bright colours to attract its kind. Nice expression

Jt Nyx
Date: 11/3/2019 6:32:00 PM

Thank you Oluwadamilare, very kind of you to say. I am glad you liked the piece.Have a great weekend. Jess

Lunita Blanca

Date: 10/29/2019 6:11:00 PM

Jessica, love is a softening of the hearteries followed by a heart attact.

Jt Nyx
Date: 10/29/2019 10:25:00 PM

It can most deff be something, but with the right person it is everything. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a message. :) Jess