Jessica Thompson Poet Rhyme

Heartbreak

I lived and loved, 
hurt and ached
 pained my heart 
to watch it break.

Gave it all, 
got none in return
to build a life
and watch it burn.

Be it right or wrong,
my destiny astray
to do it over endlessly
as time just ticks away.

If I knew then,
what I know now
I'd saved my love
someway, somehow.

Written by: Jessica Thompson
Date: 10/29/19

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Gideon Foli March 27, 2020 at 2:19 AM It hurts to give your heart in love and not receive any in return. Awesomely impressive Jezz. Keep them coming my dear friend. Jessica Thompson May 19, 2020 at 2:44 PM Thank you Gideon for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Take care my friend. Jess

poemtheart poemtheart January 1, 2020 at 12:33 AM Excellent..! Nicely penned poem here :) love it. Jessica Thompson February 16, 2020 at 1:24 PM Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Jess :)

Honestly J.T. December 19, 2019 at 10:54 PM Cool poem :) -JT Jessica Thompson February 16, 2020 at 1:23 PM Thank you , glad you liked it. Jess :)

Pace Ink-U-Script November 4, 2019 at 8:59 PM Jessica you couldn’t have ended this perfectly! I love the tune to this piece...it flows beautifully!!! Jessica Thompson November 5, 2019 at 1:32 PM Really appreciate all the kind words on this piece. I am glad you stopped in and enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful week. Jess

Casarah Nance November 3, 2019 at 6:35 AM This has a nice beat to it, like a heart beat, these words are felt. Jessica Thompson November 3, 2019 at 6:31 PM Thank you Casarah, always appreciate your kind and thoughtful words. Have a great weekend Jess

Oluwadamilare Adedayo November 1, 2019 at 10:35 PM Hmm, what makes you a paradigm of love is primarily what you have to offer and not what you are offered. And going through this piece, I can surely say you are one. Love itself will pain your days in bright colours to attract its kind. Nice expression Jessica Thompson November 3, 2019 at 6:32 PM Thank you Oluwadamilare, very kind of you to say. I am glad you liked the piece.Have a great weekend. Jess

Lunita Blanca October 29, 2019 at 6:11 PM Jessica, love is a softening of the hearteries followed by a heart attact. Jessica Thompson October 29, 2019 at 10:25 PM It can most deff be something, but with the right person it is everything. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a message. :) Jess