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Oh, living, breathing star how beautiful you are. You pulsate from afar- our cosmic avatar. Life beats inside your heart that rends dust-rays apart so elements- impart the gifts of which we're part. Life's building blocks you spread- earth creatures- your seedbed; your precious prize, widespread from richest dust- inbred, with sulfur, nitrogen, mixed well with oxygen; and carbon, hydrogen- add phosphorus- life's spun. Oh, living, breathing star- your heartbeat is bizarre. Dear God did raise the bar- has made you what you are. March 21, 2020 ~3rd Place~ Contest: Strand Pick 6 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 04/09/2020 ~7th Place~ Premiere Contest: A Star's Heartbeat Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke Judged: 03/22/2020 "The crucial elements for life on Earth, often called the building blocks of life can be abbreviated as CHNOPS: carbon, hydrogen, nitrogen, oxygen, phosphorus, and sulfur. For the first time, astronomers have cataloged the abundance of these elements in a huge sample of stars." www.space.com

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Date: 4/2/2020 12:12:00 AM
A wonderful poem Sandra ~ congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/22/2020 7:40:00 PM
We are indeed made of stardust. I loved your lovely informative entry Sandra! I am happy to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 3/22/2020 2:44:00 PM
SANDRA~ Congratulations. I love your concept of a star having a heartbeat! Panagiota xx
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