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Heartbeat of a Star


Oh, living, breathing star
     how beautiful you are.
You pulsate from afar- 
     our cosmic avatar.

Life beats inside your heart
     that rends dust-rays apart
so elements- impart
     the gifts of which we're part. 

Life's building blocks you spread-
     earth creatures- your seedbed;
your precious prize, widespread
     from richest dust- inbred,

with sulfur, nitrogen, 
     mixed well with oxygen;
and carbon, hydrogen-
     add phosphorus- life's spun.

Oh, living, breathing star-
     your heartbeat is bizarre.
Dear God did raise the bar-
     has made you what you are.


March 21, 2020

~3rd Place~
Contest: Strand Pick 6
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 04/09/2020

~7th Place~
Premiere Contest: A Star's Heartbeat
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Judged: 03/22/2020

"The crucial elements for life on Earth, often called the 
building blocks of life can be abbreviated as CHNOPS: 
carbon, hydrogen, nitrogen, oxygen, phosphorus, and
sulfur. For the first time, astronomers have cataloged the 
abundance of these elements in a huge sample of stars." 
www.space.com
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Marc Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 12:12 AM
A wonderful poem Sandra ~ congratulations on your win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 7:40 PM
We are indeed made of stardust. I loved your lovely informative entry Sandra! I am happy to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations! xxoo
Romios Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 2:44 PM
SANDRA~ Congratulations. I love your concept of a star having a heartbeat! Panagiota xx
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