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(Entry for the Micro Poem Poetry Contest, Sponsor: Ink Empress, submitted April 29, 2025)

I give you my sad heart... you give me your lonely one... our heartbeats heal each other

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Date: 5/8/2025 4:43:00 AM
Dear Jim, how heartfelt, left me in awe, such a soulful poem that depicts love so beautifully , youv written very well for the prompt " heartbeat "thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light
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Jim Healey
Date: 5/8/2025 11:53:00 AM
Thank you very much. So glad you enjoyed. Cheers from Canada. J.
Date: 5/8/2025 1:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great micro poem: Heartbeat :) - hugs
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Jim Healey
Date: 5/8/2025 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Take care. Jim
Date: 5/3/2025 7:32:00 AM
Hey there, Jim...your poem resonates like a heartbeat—raw, honest, and full of emotion. Truly beautiful, my friend to the north.
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Jim Healey
Date: 5/3/2025 7:56:00 AM
Thank you, Mickey. Appreciate your kind words. Take care. Jim

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