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(Entry for the Micro Poem Poetry Contest, Sponsor: Ink Empress, submitted April 29, 2025)

Heartbeat

I give you my sad heart...
you give me your lonely one...
our heartbeats heal each other
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May 8, 2025 at 4:43 AM
Dear Jim, how heartfelt, left me in awe, such a soulful poem that depicts love so beautifully , youv written very well for the prompt " heartbeat "thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light
Healey Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 11:53 AM
Thank you very much. So glad you enjoyed. Cheers from Canada. J.
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 1:40 AM
- Congratulations on your great micro poem: Heartbeat :) - hugs
Healey Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Take care. Jim
Grubb Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Hey there, Jim...your poem resonates like a heartbeat—raw, honest, and full of emotion. Truly beautiful, my friend to the north.
Healey Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Mickey. Appreciate your kind words. Take care. Jim
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