Heartbeat

one strong heartbeat that pumps and carries oxygen gives life; when it stops






















*Its a controversial subject. However when one heart stops another can live through organ donation.

04-25-21

Contest:Paradox of Life Poetry 
Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Len Gasun

May 2, 2021 at 7:33 AM

Brilliant thought dear Alexis. Congratulations!

Howard Kerr

May 2, 2021 at 3:09 AM

Alexis, Well done. A creative entry. Howard

Line Gauthier

April 30, 2021 at 10:22 PM

nice message, Alexis ~

Juliet Ligon

April 30, 2021 at 6:24 PM

Amazing how we are sustained daily until we're not. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

April 30, 2021 at 4:20 PM

yes, that amazing heart just one day stops. Good one, Alexis. Congrats to you.

Mystic Rose Rose

April 30, 2021 at 12:23 PM

strange that you shared this today my friend's husband is getting a kidney from someone today, thank you for sharing, glad I stopped by, have a great day congrats xo

Anisha Dutta

April 30, 2021 at 10:33 AM

Precise approach. Congrats to win. Blessing

Jennifer Proxenos

April 30, 2021 at 10:12 AM

Well done Alexis my dear friend - I enjoyed how you put this controversial subject into a striking Monoku - very clever. Hugs and blessings from across the pond, going down to the sea for two weeks -with my laptop of course - hope i get inspired. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Anitha Jayasankar

April 30, 2021 at 9:38 AM

Beautiful thought Alexis.. Congrats on you win.. Have a blessed day.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith

April 30, 2021 at 8:25 AM

Congratulations on your win. Like the added note. All so very true. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day......................

Marilene Evans

April 30, 2021 at 8:17 AM

Congrats! You left the readers hanging or finish it up with their own imagination.... clever....

Unseeking Seeker

April 30, 2021 at 8:02 AM

Great message here! Congrats on your win, Alexis and thanks for visiting my page :)

Funom Makama

April 27, 2021 at 6:19 PM

Beautiful, as a medical doctor, this tickled my fancy. I call my wife my heartbeat (anyway)..

Christuraj Alex

April 26, 2021 at 8:57 AM

Yeah...

Sotto Poet

April 26, 2021 at 6:36 AM

Great Thought Dear Alexis and a smart move towards the contest, with my very best wishes, hugs and regards //Lasaad

Tom Cunningham

April 26, 2021 at 1:55 AM

Its amazing that when your time is up you can help someone live. Every one should be an organ doner. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

April 26, 2021 at 1:53 AM

A very intelligent monoku.

Sara Kendrick

April 25, 2021 at 4:56 PM

No one would want my heart because I have a hole in the wall between the atria and there is also a tumor in there which causes arrhythmia. I was on the organ donor list until I found out about the problems I have and I told them not to put me back on it(if I were to die in an automobile accident). Your work is a timely subject that can save another's life and give them a chance to live. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara