Heartaches

When heartbeats race, it could be love.
   Loves lonely heart yearns for romance.
   Romance with secrets, loves heartbroken.
   Heartbroken love dies with mistrust.
   Mistrust like rust corrodes two lonely hearts.

   12/ 12/ 2015..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 5:38 AM
I've never tried this form before with the final word starting the new line - wonder what it's called - great write George:-) Hugs Jan xx
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January 6, 2016 at 4:39 AM
Hello Jan, i believe that it is called a chain verse. Thankyou for your kind comments. My warmest regards to you. George.
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