Heart wrecker

A zapped mallet 
She wields in her feeble hands 
Every heart is nailed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Saaka Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 8:18 PM
Cool verse!
Amed  Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Thank you :)
Agustin Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Amed  Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 1:22 PM
Thank you and Amen :)
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December 4, 2023 at 1:53 PM
Great haiku with clever use of words..
Amed  Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 5:04 AM
Thank you:)
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